A nervous look before he enters inside; a wrong intention is showing in his eyes. An oversized coat reserves room to hide just one desired book. He quickly sighs. A seller greets him with no hunch about his tries to rob the shop. Others return the seller's greeting with joy, he - with doubts. A suspicion in mind, a new concern. He does not look poor but vicious - a thief in question, hanging around with a book, pretending to read some pages. A brief, dissatisfied gaze to the left to look - he's being watched. Twenty pounds from his case, unwilling, he pays the cashier, disgraced.
I wrote this poem for a poetry contest I entered. But I did not dare to read it there. So, I post it here. I hope you enjoy it. I tried to tell a story with this poem, bring the moment alive.
A picture from the English bookshop in Belgium, Mons, where I went for the poetry contest.
You have written well, explained the story of a thief, but ended up feeling embarrassed in front of the cashier.